本帖最后由 花满楼 于 2012-8-23 21:47 编辑



【一萼红】

记凭题、掇些些春事,裁夜入缣诗。
困酒廊前,窄肠巷外,渺感草草年涯。
算来也、关天涩月,道临岐、应照楚船归。
与宵长,送飞衡雁,啼过江湄。

催换老枫残翠,抵冱寒霑露,泫湿轻衣。
笑靥桃花,休将琴问,招梦深浅当时。
拌情字、言谁勘破,似江湖、相忘续相思。
端为落霙抱影,淡了无期。




一方

2012-08-23 22:52:40

楼主是表达种惆怅之思,通过“困、渺、啼、催、湿……”等借景抒情,排遣那种“物是人非、岁月蹉跎、涤荡人生”之情愫,“拌情字、言谁勘破,似江湖、相忘续相思”点了旨意,整体上该文言之有物、文字精致、凄美,字含珠矶。其实,我认为对于春事的惆怅之思是人生的缩写,是心灵的释怀,拥有它,便拥有了人生的喜怒哀乐、无怨无悔的似水年华。

花影云裳

2012-08-24 08:03:28

[b]欣赏中。。。。。。[/b]

南国飞雪

2012-08-24 17:38:19

看不懂。

花满楼

2012-08-24 22:04:32

[quote][size=2][color=#999999]一方 发表于 2012-8-23 22:52[/color] [url=forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&pid=1241809&ptid=271117][img]static/image/common/back.gif[/img][/url][/size] 楼主是表达种惆怅之思,通过“困、渺、啼、催、湿……”等借景抒情,排遣那种“物是人非、岁月蹉跎、涤荡人 ...[/quote] 敬茶,一方言评,娓娓道来,花满楼愧也莫及。

花满楼

2012-08-24 22:05:37

[quote][size=2][color=#999999]花影云裳 发表于 2012-8-24 08:03[/color] [url=forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&pid=1242409&ptid=271117][img]static/image/common/back.gif[/img][/url][/size] 欣赏中。。。。。。[/quote] 云裳雅赏,不好,弃之也无妨。

花满楼

2012-08-24 22:06:55

[quote][size=2][color=#999999]南国飞雪 发表于 2012-8-24 17:38[/color] [url=forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&pid=1243513&ptid=271117][img]static/image/common/back.gif[/img][/url][/size] 看不懂。[/quote] 我也纠结,自己也很难悟解,情,困乎?逝也?

NIKITA

2012-08-27 15:49:46

意境很美,也很惆怅,其它我不懂。还是要赞!{:10_478:}

花影云裳

2012-08-30 23:51:04

[b]花满楼,是你的原创的作品吗?[/b]

姜太公在此

2012-08-31 17:26:22

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快要九岁了

2012-09-03 15:23:36

哪个回复这么大个人,配楼主的美文啊{:10_478:}